Aug. 27th, 2013

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What's this? A chapter before midnight? Clearly the world is ending.

Important note: Since the next chapter (chapter 7) is pretty long, I am going to be splitting it into two parts. One will go up next week, and the other the week after that (hopefully, anyway). Sorry for the delay!

On with chapter 6!

Chapter Six: Team )

A couple of notes here:

First, when Rin is thinking about the "snap" of his kick - I wasn't exactly sure how to translate this, but luckily my quality control guy/swim-picker figured out what Rin was talking about. Unfortunately, it's been a few years since he's swum seriously, so he couldn't remember if there was another, more specific term I should use. So to any swimmers out there (I know there's a few of you!), if you know a better way to phrase that, please tell me so I can change it! :)

Secondly, a wild Kou appears! But since the furigana for her name didn't indicate that she called herself Kou, I am assuming that she hasn't yet decided to change her name, and so I went with Gou for this chapter. (Just in case anyone was wondering.)

And of course, please point out any mistakes/typos/just plain weird stuff, as usual.

Translated from raws downloaded at this post.

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