Hi, I started reading your translations a few days ago and I just wanted to say you have done such a lovely job. The text really flows smoothly and naturally :) Thank you for taking the time and effort to do this!

Just a small thing, though. In this part; "The events were all separated by age and sex--", perhaps gender would be better word to use? Mostly because I have a hard time imagining a kid using the word sex--even if that kid is Haruka :)

In any case, keep up the good work! Cheers!